Name: Dao My Ngoc Linh
Class: 081202A
ID number: 08120086
Writing, easy or not?
To master any foreign language is very difficult, especially to write what we think in other languages is more and more difficult. Whenever my teacher gave me any topic to write, I always got not good marks, even very bad marks. Maybe a part of this is I am not interested in writing much, and the other is some reasons I will list below. So how to improve writing skill is my aim on this writing.
Actually the main reason cause the problem is me, I have no ideas for my topics, I don’t know how and where to begin my writing paper. Why? Because I did not spend enough time to invest for my topics. I wrote them in a hurry to hand in for my teacher on time, I didn’t look for the information about the topic I would write, just wrote with my narrow knowledge. Next, not often reading books is the problem also and the fact that I don’t read books a lot even my textbook; in addition, when reading I don’t care about the new words, the ways the authors write and expressed their ides, just read to know what the writer want to say, to know the content. Another is I did not regularly write. Sometimes I wanted to write something about my family, my friends, things happened around me, about the funny things I saw and some interesting people I just met at the first time but at that time I did not have a paper or a pen on my hand and certainly, the result was I did miss my feelings and not write. I lost a lot of chances to write just because my laziness. That is very terrible. Besides, I lack of the experience about both practical life and theory, so my writing became boring, just a few words and a few sentences, no ideas or repeated ideas.
Moreover, the outside factors also made me feel difficult when I wrote. The environment around me was often noisy, someone bothered when I just started to write. I didn’t really have enough time to write because the schedule is rather heavy.
In short, there are a lot of reasons make u confused but you, yourself is still the main reason, the biggest problem needs to be solved. Don’t be bothered by books much, let’s write what you want to write, learn the ways the authors express their ideas and write your ideas by your own way, by your own words and avoid all my mistakes. All belong to your effort, try more and a little bit interest in writing, I believe that u will succeed
Thứ Sáu, 23 tháng 10, 2009
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paragraph level
Trả lờiXóaGrammar: A
Vocabulary:A
Development:A
Ideas:A+
Unity, coherence:A
Essay level
Introductory paragraph:A
-Thesis statement: A
-Ways of developing:A
Development:A
Connection among the paragraphs: A
INTRODUCTION (1ms)
Trả lờiXóa- Background, hook 1
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BODY (4.5ms)
- Good ideas 2
- Coherence, unity, development 1
- Language: Grammar, vocabulary (1.5)
CONCLUSION (2ms)
- Summarize (1)
- Lesson, suggestions (1)
Total: 7.5